Essay Analysis
Important Dates

Round 1

09/13/2023

Round 2

01/08/2025

Round 3

04/02/2025

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October 1, 2024

How to Write the Kellogg School Of Management Essay 1

*Updated Sep 2024*

Intentionality is a key aspect of what makes our graduates successful Kellogg leaders. Help us understand your journey by articulating your motivations for pursuing an MBA, the specific goals you aim to achieve, and why you believe now is the right moment. Moreover, share why you feel Kellogg is best suited to serve as a catalyst for your career aspirations and what you will contribute to our community of lifelong learners during your time here. (450 words)

This is as bog standard as it gets. But, to Kellogg’s credit, ‘the ballgame.’ Points for not asking dumb questions to try to play footsie. “Say what you mean to say, Kellogg!” Something TO that.

Let’s review the key elements they’ve outlined––and these should be extremely familiar to you by now, if you’ve dug it at all to the MBA application journey:

  1. Articulate your motivations for pursuing an MBA. Why not just pursue your goals… raw?!
  2. What goals are you aiming to achieve (by way of this MBA program; i.e., at business school/through these two years)?
  3. Why now and not a few years prior, or a few years later?
  4. And how might Kellogg catalyze your career more meaningfully than a nearby M7 program?

Let’s take these one by one:

[1] Articulate your motivations for pursuing an MBA. Why not just pursue your goals… raw?!

There’s one kinda dumb point to make, which we’ll just get out of the way. ‘Having’ an MBA might make you more potent in the job market. Sorta. Depends. And in some cases it doesn’t matter if you actually ‘learned’ anything. Just the fact of having those three letters next to your name makes some person in a position of ‘needing your services’ be instantly impressed. Is that a good enough reason to pursue it? Honestly? Yeah. But okay. It serves us ‘not at all’ to reckon with this, so let’s push this aside. It’s not like we can say this on an application and Kellogg’s goes “They get it!”

So forget all that. Let’s consider the need for an MBA ‘at all’ as though it offered some meaningful utility to you and your eventual goals, from a ‘can achieve more with this thing’ standpoint. Just suppose for a hot second that you didn’t pursue an MBA at all. Now what? Shrivel up, find a corner, hug your knees, and weep? Nah man. You, I hope (?), pursue your goals, you freak. How? The way that the vast majority of humans might, the one who don’t have MBAs and are plenty successful: see the vast majority of non-MBAs who are plenty successful. How’d they do it? The normal way: grinding, pushing themselves, identifying opportunities for growth and development, growing and developing, accumulating leverage, trading that leverage for promotions, salary bumps, or perhaps pivoting, fill in the blank here, climbing the ladder, advancing, something. Just throw a rock at a semi-successful non-MBA in the business realm and you’ll find an endless well of examples of how fruitful careers might materialize. What’s your non-MBA version? What would your plan be? Think about your goal. And now chart out a road map that doesn’t pass through an elite MBA (or even an MBA of any kind) and figure out the best possible way in which you might achieve a great version of your goals. How’d you do it? What were you able to achieve? How? What made that success possible?

Now ask yourself this: but with an MBA, could that achievement be different? If so, different how? Bigger? New dimension to the success? Whatever the case, there must be some way in which this alternate scenario is notably different from the non-MBA version. If you can wrap your mind around what that is, congrats. You’ve just figured out the thing you’re hoping to achieve through an MBA. Write that down. Being as specific as you can about what specific aspects of Scenario 2 were conferred BY the process of achieving that MBA––the training, the exposure, the network explosion, the skill building, the weakness-shoring, all of it.

[2] What goals are you aiming to achieve (by way of this MBA program; i.e., at business school/through these two years)?

You’ll quickly start to see that the first question and this second question… go together. They are, in fact, one. Whatever you’re aiming to achieve (by way of this MBA program, i.e., at business school) *is* your motivation for pursuing an MBA in the first place. So, you’re welcome, two questions for the price of one, wahoo! Next!

[3] Why now and not a few years prior, or a few years later?

Why is the timing important? This is a very interesting opportunity for you to create real distance between you and your nearby competitors. While most might be able - after some careful consideration - to fashion a compelling-enough rationale for pursuing an MBA, harder to answer is the question of YOU KNOW WHAT BUT WHY NOW THOUGH? (That’s a Key & Peele reference for any fans out there.)

The logic behind ‘why now’ says a lot about how good a planner you are, and how much you ‘get’ about solving problems effectively. Think about *any* business problem. Every single decision has (should have) a tactical underpinning. The most bankable successes are folks who apply sound solution to the right problems at the right time. Think about your achieving your goals as a problem that needs solving. Where part of the ‘best’ solution includes your pursuing an MBA at this moment. One helpful thought exercise is to play out three scenarios:

  • Scenario 1: Imagine what it would have been like to have pursued your MBA one or two years ago.
  • Scenario 2: Now imagine what it would be like to WAIT a few years and then get your MBA.
  • Scenario 3: Finally, imagine doing it ‘now.’

Can you sell us on how Scenarios 1 and 2 may lead to decent outcomes, but not the optimal one? What is it about what you have learned thus far that will enable you to extract MORE from an MBA, compared to if you’d pursued it earlier? What might be lost or wasted if you were to wait? Why then is Scenario 3 the Goldilocks version where the timing makes the most logical sense? If you can articulate this succinctly, it tells us not that your reasoning is sound, but rather, that you are a sound reasoner. That, friends, is something an MBA program is looking to invest in.

[4] And how might Kellogg catalyze your career more meaningfully than a nearby M7 program?

Now, it gets a little tricky. Business schools know you’re not just applying to Kellogg. They may even expect that you’re applying to ‘shinier’ programs out there. They know the list. Nearby U Chicago. Not so nearby but threats like other, higher-ranked M7 programs. They know the list, all too well. (That’s for the Swifties.)

Why is that important. Because Kellogg isn’t dumb. If you were to make it seem like there’s no possible way to achieve what you’re hoping to achieve BUT THROUGH Kellogg, it will come off not only disingenuous, but… silly. A more reasoned, sober approach is the way to go. What if you were to openly acknowledge (not directly necessarily but through your ‘posture’) that you get that you would do just fine to travel through ANY strong MBA program and extract tons of value because, honestly, that’s what they want: someone who is adaptable, not fragile or limited. The question then is, what is it about you, and your goals, and your learning and leadership and business style that might benefit in a particular way from what Kellogg has to offer? In order to nail this component, you need to articulate what it is you would most benefit from *a* business program, given who you are and what your specific goals are. Then, once you’ve laid out this argument in the abstract, now it’s time to make a case that there are specific things about Kellogg that, having done your homework, you feel may bring out an even better version of you than another (otherwise equally-matched) opportunity. To pull *this* off, it will help to have visited the school, talked to current and former students, researched the living hell out of the program leveraging every resource available to you. And being very specific about identifying not just the specific opportunities by name but articulating the way in which those opportunities will combine best with you and your specific needs and goals.

Here’s how you might organize it on your first go:

  1. Open with a broad statement of what it is you’re hoping to achieve. Super big picture. What’s the opportunity? Or the problem you’re hoping to solve? What does the impact look like of a successful effort here? What has changed? Improved? This should be impossibly big picture, but important to get a sense of what the end goal is. (75-100 words)
  2. Now, explain why it is that you can’t just carry on doing what you’re doing to achieve the biggest and best version of that. Sure you can achieve some version, but not *the* version that motivates you. What skills do you have that enable you to be credible for pursuing it in the first place? And that give us any reason to expect for you to be successful? Now, and here’s the key, what’s holding you back? What’s missing? What stuff do you need? Remember that exercise we did above? This is where that comes together, and you explain the reason you need an MBA, and what you know you’re going to extract from a top program. (125-150 words)
  3. Now, explain why the earlier or later version isn’t as good as the now version. How does this make sense when you consider your goals as a problem to solve, and where pursuing an MBA *now* is an important feature to the best solution? (100-125 words)
  4. Finally, explain what type of business school would match precisely what you need in order to succeed. What aspects of a learning environment, resources, opportunities would be ideal not just given your goals, but given that *you* are the one pursuing those goals. You need to connect very specific features of yourself, your skills, your whims, your quirks, your optimal conditions for success TO this ‘ideal’ program, initially in the abstract. THEN, and only then, reveal that after all your research, you have found that there are several features of Kellogg specifically, that elevate *your* confidence that this is the place where you are most likely to develop the best version of a person intent on achieving your goals. (100-125 words)

That’ll get you a credible first draft.

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September 29, 2024

*Updated Sep 2024*

Kellogg leaders are primed to tackle challenges everywhere, from the boardroom to their neighborhoods. Describe a specific professional experience where you had to make a difficult decision. Reflecting on this experience, identify the values that guided your decision-making process and how it impacted your leadership style. (450 words)

Clap clap, Kellogg. This is a great question, not that you’re interested in our approval, but still, it’s kind of like our version of the Paul Hollywood handshake.

The real trick to this one is seeing just how much you ‘get’ the concept of what makes a difficult decision… truly difficult. It’s tempting to conflate a situation or task that’s challenging, and onerous, and not simple, and not easy to navigate, versus a ‘decision’ that is difficult. Kellogg is all over this one, and we know this because of what they ask in the second half––allow us to restate it in a way that reveals the ‘code’ underneath it all:

What decision required you to push past your normal problem-solving faculties, and recruit an assist from something more profound and values-based in order to navigate? In other words, what decision required something other than logic and black belt problem-solving skills to handle? It’s more complex than it may seem at first blush. You need to be able to differentiate between decisions that don’t require an ‘escalation’ to the top, top dog (‘values’ center), and those that do. 

Here’s one potentially useful exercise:

Can you imagine a time when, faced with a decision, there were several potential solutions that an outsider might rate as ‘correct’ and/or would successfully ‘solve the problem’ and yet… felt either wrong or incomplete on some other level? That’s a great way to tease it out. “In order to save this project, meet vendor expectations, fulfill the ‘job requirement,’ and be in perfect alignment with my company’s values and general M.O., one obvious solution is X. And in the hands of someone else, Solution X might be a no-brainer. However, it doesn’t sit right with me, because it misses ABC, or it isn’t morally sound, or it might seem to succeed seen in one light, but risks denaturing something much more profound in another…” That’s just a glimpse of how that line of thinking might go. 

Let’s build on that and add another dimension: Imagine a decision you’ve been faced with that 9 out of 10 others (in your shoes) would have handled ONE way. And that way makes absolute, logical sense to you. (This is key. The best example of a ‘tough’ decision here is one where the expected solution makes perfect, logical business sense.) However, you handled it differently, because something else kicked in (your values) which steered you in a slightly different direction.

That’s what Kellogg means here when they’re asking about a ‘difficult’ decision. And that’s one ‘stress test’ to see if your potential examples qualify. Does your example, in the hands of several other leaders, lead to a sensible but different solution? One that you agree has logical merits? But that you chose to handle some other way because of a value?

Now that you’ve identified the *correct* decision type to truly satisfy this question, now you need to be able to tap into the way in which some value of yours factored into your ultimate handling of the issue. Take us through the inner dialogue. Sell us on the merits of the expected solution that another person might have embraced. Truly sell it. Show us why this might have made perfect sense in someone else’s hands. But then explain why that solution/approach wasn’t complete, or giving you pause, or creating some kind of inner conflict in you. Explain the issue and why you needed to source something other than pure logic in order to find a more complete, fuller, and ultimately better solution. Explain what happened, and then show us why your approach was the correct approach (regardless of the outcome, even though presumably it was a success in others’ eyes).

Structure:

  1. Bring us into the ‘difficult decision’ by first setting the stage. Explain the situation, convey the stakes, explain the challenge, and finally articulate what an expected, sound solution (in someone else’s hands) MIGHT have looked at, and sell us on the merits. (75-100 words)
  2. Now, explain why this alternative approach was lacking. What did it miss? Why was it incomplete or insufficient? What made the decision so much more complex than how it might have appeared on paper? Reveal the inner workings of your business mind here. Show us that you can get inside problems and analyze the hell out of them, and see all the angles. (100-125 words)
  3. Now explain what the correct solution *needed* to incorporate, and how this tapped into your values. Take us through your thinking, the weighing of pros and cons, the calculations, the risk/reward, the fear, the irrational aspects (if any). And sell us on why this dimension was critical for you in arriving at a sound decision. (100-125 words)
  4. Finally, explained what happened, and prove that your approach (regardless of the outcome) was the ‘correct’ (‘better’) way for you to have approached it, and what that reveals to you about your leadership style. Where else can we see evidence of this? What implications does this have about the type of leader you’re hoping to develop further? (75-100 words) 

That gets you a solid first draft.

September 28, 2024

We’ve read your essays, we’ve read your resume — now we want you to bring all that to life in a video. Show us the person behind all those carefully crafted words.

The video will be comprised of three questions, each designed to help you showcase your personality and share some of the experiences that brought you here today.

Some things to keep in mind as you prepare to complete this section:

  • Video essays are due 96 hours after the application deadline.
  • A video essay link will appear on your Application Status Page after you submit your application and payment.
  • You will need an internet-connected computer with a webcam and microphone.
  • The video should take about 20-25 minutes to complete, which includes time for setup.
  • After submitting your application and payment, you will be able to access the video essay through your Application Status Page.

Here are some additional tips:

There are practice questions that you may complete as many times as you like to get comfortable with the format and technology. The practice questions and experience will simulate the actual video essay experience to help you prepare.

We encourage you to practice so you are comfortable with the format once it is time to complete the official questions. You will not have an opportunity to re-do the answer to the official video essay questions.

You will have 20 seconds to think about the question and up to one minute to give your response


The key to preparing for this type of ‘unknown’ prompt is to get to a place where the prompt won’t matter, because you’ve developed the muscle memory to:

  1. Understand fundamentally what they’re really hoping to learn, underneath it all, and
  2. Tap into your profile, because you’ve engaged with the key pieces of your overall profile and ‘application argument’ such that you know how every facet connects, thus enabling you to quickly source the correct story and angle, to deliver the perfect response efficiently and convincingly.

Simple as that! Sarcasm, yay!

We have a post about this over here.

First things first: what kinds of questions might you get? Well, and we can’t emphasize this enough, the wrong way to go about this is to fixate on specific questions, anticipate what they might be, prepare, and then hope for the best. The risk there is that they might throw you a curveball. And if they sling something your way you haven’t ‘scripted’ in your mind yet, you’re toast. Instead, here are sample questions that have been asked, but just… graze this list with your eyes, as if glancing at the sun during an eclipse, yknow, don’t stare too long. Get a feel:

  • Tell us something more about you that we can’t find on your resume.
  • Talk about a time that you failed to achieve a goal, what happened, and how did you respond?
  • Tell us about someone in your life who has helped you achieve your goals. What did they do and why were they supportive?
  • Tell us about a time you made a positive impact in your community, neighborhood, etc.
  • Tell us about a time you created professional value by bringing something that was not on the table.
  • How did you pivot from an unforeseen ask, last-minute demand, or unexpected situation?
  • How did you leverage a connection or relationship to facilitate a goal?
  • ⁠Variation: Tell us about a relationship you leveraged to accomplish a goal.
  • How long have you considered an MBA? What have you learned about yourself and your goals?
  • Tell me about a time when you realized you needed to ask for help to achieve a goal. How did you realize you couldn't do it alone and what did you learn?
  • Tell us about a time you improved a process.
  • Tell us about a time when you failed, what happened and how did you go about it?

These look familiar? That’s cuz ‘they’re the exact questions you can expect to see on most business school applications or in any standard business school interview.’ And they all hover around the same general core themes:

  • Work History
  • Fit / Contribution to the School
  • Maturity / Emotional Control / Self-Confidence
  • Achievement / Goal-Orientation / Behavioral
  • Interpersonal Skills
  • Why MBA / Why Our School?

(But do yourself a favor and check out this the Video Prompt #2 article because we go into way more detail around what each of these themes truly means to the Adcoms.)

To get to the point where you’re very comfortable answering *any* question thrown your way, you need to develop a root-level understanding of (1) what your most salient profile components are (as it impacts your application argument to business school), and (2) how they interrelate. But then there’s the other consideration which is… what is Kellogg ultimately looking for?

They, like every other elite MBA program, wants to know, who among their over-qualified pool of candidates is:

  • Most likely to succeed
  • In the biggest and best ways that align with the ‘brand’ interests of Kellogg, and also 
  • Who, when introduced to other classmates whom they’ve selected, are likely to add fuel to their fire (and benefit from the same)

Every single answer you issue, must in some way advance Kellogg’s sense of all three of those things. Sometimes it will be based on ‘facts’ you convey. Other times it will be found in the way you approached or thought about something. Other times it will be simply conveyed through your poise, body language, and the confidence you exude through clear thinking, and articulate, coherent responses.

There’s a lot more to say here, but the starting point is:

  • Figure out what your application argument is first: Get acquainted with your best stories (your ‘greatest hits’) that touch on all the key issues: leadership examples, overcoming challenges, working with teammates, thinking outside the box, seeking help from others, being intellectually curious and humble, times when you failed and learned something important, times when you succeeded and learned something important, thinking through your goals and why your pursuit of those goals should be of interest to someone else…. the usual suspects.
  • Find a repository of likely MBA interview questions (we have some, just ask), and practice the living hell out of answering. But a neat trick is to take the same question, and give yourself different time limits. Start with 3 minutes. Then do it again, but limit it to 1min. Then do it again and try 15 seconds. Notice what happens with each variation, what does the time allotment train you to do in terms of emphasizing or de-emphasizing certain aspects? At the end of that process, you’ll find that you’ve figured out precisely what the most efficient way is to get from Point A to Point B. Rinse and repeat a thousand times with other question types.
  • Eventually, something will ‘turn’ and you’ll start to sense a kind of ‘auto-pilot’ muscle kick in, and your ability to (1) locate the right story and (2) home in instantly on the right story points, and then (3) find the right words to efficiently convey those story points will happen… unconsciously. *That* is when you know you’re ready for prime time.

September 27, 2024

Re-applicants will receive a prompt about their growth since their last application: How have you grown or changed personally and professionally since you previously applied and what steps have you taken to become the strongest candidate you can be? (250 words)

This is a typical re-applicant essay – a nice, specific question about updates on short-term and long-term career goals. It’s important to keep in mind when addressing this piece that it’s not just about the matter-of-fact update itself… we also need to assess the IMPROVEMENT you’ve pulled off.

In other words, one year later, your career plan has to become sharper or more plausible, or more exciting in some way. We need to understand HOW. And WHY. That’s the key: a crystal clear explanation of how your candidacy has improved and what it means given your (new and improved) reasons for getting an MBA. Take a deeper dive into our analysis below:

The Re-applicant Essay

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